Meeting a sweet girl

Post type : 55  words story

Genre : Fiction

She was sitting next to me in the bus. She was a very beautiful and charming girl . I liked her  innocent face  and kissed on her cheek. She gave a very sweet smile.

After some time  her destination stop came and she went down. She waved me good bye and joined her nursery school classmates.

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13 responses to this post.

  1. Posted by Ravi Kiran on May 3, 2009 at 10:34 am

    Marvelous d00d…… Ur getting better….. Nice one!!

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  2. great story 😀

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  3. Posted by Divyendu on May 3, 2009 at 5:55 pm

    bahut khoob 🙂

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  4. And I was about to yell ..”HOW ??? ” before reading the ending 🙂

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  5. Posted by umesh kewat on May 4, 2009 at 7:02 am

    sahin me mast likha hai
    but maine pahle se hi end hat ker socha tha aur wahin hua…

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  6. Posted by Amol on May 4, 2009 at 7:07 am

    Beauty of a story 🙂

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  7. Posted by amitabh on May 4, 2009 at 9:22 am

    🙂 ………

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  8. Posted by Chandan on May 6, 2009 at 5:09 am

    Bahut Badiya…. [:)]

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  9. Posted by dheeraj on May 11, 2009 at 11:38 am

    Nice Mak. Seems that you have got great capabilities which i could not realize in our college time. But yeah these posts are really awesome. Great Buddy, keep the spark !!!!!!

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  10. Posted by makrand13 on May 14, 2009 at 11:30 am

    thnx to all for liking my first attempt at 55 words

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  11. Posted by nehalkumar on May 19, 2009 at 9:24 am

    sahi,,.

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  12. Posted by nehalkumar on May 19, 2009 at 12:00 pm

    life me isase jyada kuchh ho bhi nahi sakta 😦

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  13. This story just made my day 🙂 🙂

    Reply

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