The Betrayal

She was sleeping on the bed. He moved slowly towards her and stood nearby.

A drop  of sweat fell from his forehead on her cheek. She opened her eyes and saw him holding the revolver pointed to her forehead. She could see the anger on his face because of her betrayal.

She closed her eyes again.


8 responses to this post.

  1. Beautiful 🙂


  2. Posted by amitabh on May 27, 2009 at 6:19 am

    bahut badiyaa !!!!


  3. are u narrating a scene in a movie 😛


  4. Posted by Dhiraj Chawla on May 27, 2009 at 7:37 am

    Goli maaro bheje me… Uske jo JHOL karta hai… 😀


  5. nice nice….very nice…


  6. Posted by DC++ on May 27, 2009 at 1:12 pm

    what do you think, that you will write anything and i will appreciate your ANYTHING.
    Not a good one.


  7. There were too many “revolver pointing scenes” these days in IIIT blogroll.

    On a totally different note, from what I observed in 55 fiction, the punch line is expected in the last few words. 🙂


  8. Posted by makrand13 on May 29, 2009 at 10:48 am

    thnx to all for comments


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