The Soldier in a War

He was moving with a gun in his hand. Other soldiers of his army were  already dead.

He was scared of death and was moving ahead very cautiously. But, he could not see the enemy coming from behind the wall.

He was  shot in his  head. He was dead .

The Counter Strike game was over.

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12 responses to this post.

  1. Posted by umesh kewat on July 24, 2009 at 7:33 am

    hehehe thats the napster….. highest count of killing opponent. now he ambushed….

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  2. Posted by Ravi Kiran on July 24, 2009 at 9:39 am

    Nice story yaar….. your best one..

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  3. Posted by vrikmace on July 24, 2009 at 10:23 am

    wow… You work magic with 55 words… always a delight to read.

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  4. heh heh heh…. 😀

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  5. Posted by Malasree on July 24, 2009 at 4:07 pm

    Hehehe nice story!!!!

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  6. Posted by amitabh on July 25, 2009 at 10:21 am

    he he he ………
    this is quality stuff Makrand …..

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  7. Posted by DC++ on July 25, 2009 at 6:28 pm

    U give a slowly turn to emotions…ulitmate one…..

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  8. Posted by makrand13 on July 26, 2009 at 6:23 am

    @umesh napster was rarely killed 🙂
    @ravi thnx for appreciation. u give me confidence that i would have atleast one reader in future too 🙂
    @vrikmace thnx to let me know u liked it
    @divs smile from me too 🙂
    @Malasree thnx 🙂
    @amitabh thnx 🙂 hope to improve quality in future :). After all i am a quality man 😀
    @DC++ thnx a lot, hope u keep liking my posts

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  9. Amazing read … All these 55 Words are too good , Liked the last water one …
    dn’t however liked the REVENGE 😉

    U sure have got one avid follower in me 🙂

    keep goin

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  10. Posted by makrand13 on July 29, 2009 at 6:25 am

    thnx swappy 🙂

    Reply

  11. Gosh!…. this one had me seriously curious!

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