The Revenge

She was tired after day’s work but  could not  sleep. A continuous disturbing sound was keeping her awake.

Her irritation had reached the maximum level. At last she decided to take some action.

Suddenly a small needle like thing pinched her skin. She moved her hand instantaneously on the attacker.

The mosquito was finally killed.


8 responses to this post.

  1. Awesome… as always, a witty ending…
    BTW in 55 words, are the articles and prepositions included?!


  2. Posted by makrand13 on July 26, 2009 at 3:02 pm

    @abhishek thnx , as per my knowledge they are included.


  3. Posted by DC++ on July 26, 2009 at 4:32 pm

    Not a good one…


  4. Nice 55s man 🙂 GG! keep writing


  5. Nice 55s man!! GG.. keep writing 🙂


  6. @himank thnx for ur words of appreciation.
    @DC++ ,sry to disappoint u
    This 55 got a mixed reaction and i will try to write better ones in future


  7. 😆 good one 🙂 I liked the totally unexpected ending 🙂


  8. thnx Indian Homemaker 🙂


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