“Honey, do you remember our last picnic with my office friends?”
She was just smiling.
“And do you remember how terrible food I cooked for the first time? ”
She was still smiling.
“Can you please stop smiling and talk to me ? “, he almost yelled with frustration.
She kept smiling in the photograph on the wall.
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Posted by gowri dev on September 17, 2009 at 5:08 pm
heart touching story 😦 😦 :P.its good one
Posted by makrand on September 17, 2009 at 6:15 pm
thnx gowri 🙂 , i used only 1 smiley though
Posted by christ on September 17, 2009 at 5:19 pm
Very nice.. 🙂
Posted by makrand on September 17, 2009 at 6:19 pm
thnx buddy 🙂
Posted by DC++ on September 17, 2009 at 5:20 pm
Awesome dude, it has two different endings….
I am amazed dear, how u think of all these….
Simply Superb… 🙂
Posted by makrand on September 17, 2009 at 6:19 pm
thnx dear 🙂
keep reading
Posted by amitabh on September 18, 2009 at 5:09 am
touching ……. 🙂
Posted by makrand on September 18, 2009 at 6:51 am
😦 for the end
🙂 for ur comment
Posted by Swaram on September 18, 2009 at 6:09 am
Cud never guess the end! From the pic 😦
Posted by makrand on September 18, 2009 at 6:52 am
thats what 55s are all about . If u couldn’t guess, the story worked 🙂
Posted by Kunal on September 18, 2009 at 7:46 am
ouch! that hurt…
it was such a feel-good till the last 4-5 words..
great word play!
Posted by makrand on September 18, 2009 at 2:42 pm
oo, but nice to know it touched .
thnx n keep visting 🙂
Posted by umesh on September 18, 2009 at 9:07 am
touching story……… keep going on….
Posted by makrand on September 18, 2009 at 2:46 pm
thnx bhai 🙂
Posted by Abhishek Sainani on September 18, 2009 at 8:17 pm
Wonderful… I wasn’t expecting such a twist in the end, and yet it is so obvious! 😀
I’m a BIG fan of your 55 words fiction !!
Posted by makrand on September 19, 2009 at 4:48 am
thnx abhishek for the BIG appreciation. You made my day 🙂
Keep reading 🙂
Posted by Piyush Nigam on September 20, 2009 at 10:04 am
I have always read you 55 words stories. but has been too lazy to comment …
nice one 🙂
Posted by makrand on September 23, 2009 at 10:55 am
hey piyush, thnx 🙂
I myself being lazy can’t comment on ur laziness :D, but feels nice to know that u worked hard finally to put a comment 🙂
keep visiting n commenting 🙂
Posted by Swapnil on October 15, 2009 at 6:26 pm
Touchy and Cute
Posted by makrand on October 17, 2009 at 6:54 am
thnx 🙂