Her Smile

“Honey, do you remember our last picnic with my office friends?”

She was just smiling.

“And do you remember how terrible food I cooked for the first time? ”

She was still smiling.

“Can you please stop smiling and talk to me ? “,  he almost yelled with frustration.

She kept smiling in the photograph on the wall.


20 responses to this post.

  1. Posted by gowri dev on September 17, 2009 at 5:08 pm

    heart touching story 😦 😦 :P.its good one


  2. Very nice.. 🙂


  3. Posted by DC++ on September 17, 2009 at 5:20 pm

    Awesome dude, it has two different endings….
    I am amazed dear, how u think of all these….
    Simply Superb… 🙂


  4. Posted by amitabh on September 18, 2009 at 5:09 am

    touching ……. 🙂


  5. Cud never guess the end! From the pic 😦


  6. ouch! that hurt…

    it was such a feel-good till the last 4-5 words..

    great word play!


  7. Posted by umesh on September 18, 2009 at 9:07 am

    touching story……… keep going on….


  8. Wonderful… I wasn’t expecting such a twist in the end, and yet it is so obvious! 😀
    I’m a BIG fan of your 55 words fiction !!


  9. Posted by Piyush Nigam on September 20, 2009 at 10:04 am

    I have always read you 55 words stories. but has been too lazy to comment …

    nice one 🙂


    • hey piyush, thnx 🙂
      I myself being lazy can’t comment on ur laziness :D, but feels nice to know that u worked hard finally to put a comment 🙂
      keep visiting n commenting 🙂


  10. Posted by Swapnil on October 15, 2009 at 6:26 pm

    Touchy and Cute


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